Here She Comes

Some Lyrics from a song I wrote called Here She Comes 
to see how it reads on paper (or screen)

I discovered a place
Where the ego's free
It's the power in your face
Makes the shakes in me

Oh I didn't wanna be here
But maybe now I do
Just that I shouldn't be here
With you

Here She Comes

Here she comes boy you better be ready to run
Try not to look at her face
Here she comes like a storm, sunset red leather on
She wears colours of flames

So be warned
Here She Comes!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 30, 2016 at 8:09 PM
enjoying this a second time. SKAT
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December 17, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Daniel , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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December 16, 2013 at 10:20 AM
a nice read no doubt... i can wait to see her,,, good write
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December 9, 2013 at 10:59 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Daniel ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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December 9, 2013 at 10:04 AM
Hi Daniel ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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