Here now this morn

We need no map for we dwell in the gap, 
carried by currents of bliss magnetism,
having since discerned that thoughts are a trap,
blocking grace from igniting body prism,
so path of silence is our chosen ism.
We are both the oneness field and this urn,
where draped in bliss mists we willingly burn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 3, 2026 at 7:51 PM
A richly meditative rhyme royal that gives spiritual insight a vivid, embodied presence. The strong ababbcc movement carries the reader from the “gap” beyond thought into the luminous paradox of being both “oneness field” and “urn.” Images such as “bliss mists,” “body prism,” and “willingly burn” create an atmosphere of surrender, transformation, and quietly ecstatic awareness.
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September 4, 2026 at 4:37 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Alison
Rodgers Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 6:00 AM
Hello US, such a gentle, luminous stillness to it. I love the way you hold that “gap,” that space where thought dissolves and the body becomes a prism for grace. I think the burn you describe isn’t pain but offering, a soft surrender into oneness. Your voice always carries that calm, centered glow, and this piece is another beautiful step along that path. Blessings, Daniel
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September 3, 2026 at 6:21 AM
The burn has to do with bliss magnetism, cool heat, divine energy arising from a centreless fulcrum, related to kundalini. It is intense yet blissful.
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