Here now this morn

immersed in the thick of action
we yet therein seek no outcome
this dream unfolds as is ordained
where all we heed is God’s bliss hum
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August 29, 2026 at 11:53 PM
I really enjoyed the spiritual grounding in this piece. The seamless flow of the lines beautifully mirrors the theme of surrendering to the present moment. The contrast between being in the "thick of action" and seeking "no outcome" is wonderfully expressed, and it all resolves on such a peaceful, resonant note with "God's bliss hum." A beautifully meditative read!
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August 30, 2026 at 3:06 AM
Thank you, Alison, your encouraging words uplift my spirits, God bless.
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