Here In the Dark

Here in the dark

Verse 1
You're always there in my darkest hour,
A star that lights my way
And in the morning after I awake
I see that you're still here

Pre-chorus
I just wanted you to know
that you're everything to me
Everything to me

Chorus
And here in the dark,
that's where you shine so bright
Yeah here in the dark,
You illuminate my night

Verse 2
I face the laughter of this jeering brood,
They hope it bothers me
Incessant critics of the cruelest kind
Sends me into a somber mood

Pre-chorus
Oh how their laughter makes them
look insane
I wish they'd fade away
wish they'd fade away

Verse 3
I raise my eyes to a blackened sky
there's no light to lead the way
What has happened to my northern star?
Please don't ever go away

Chorus
And here in the dark
that's where you shine so bright
Yeah here in the dark
You illuminate my life

Verse 4 
It's two days now since you've gone away
And everything is dark
I always thought that you'd always stay
The emptiness is stark

Pre-chorus
I thought that you understood
that you're everything to me
everything to me

Chorus 2
Now here in the dark
there's no one shining bright
Yeah now here in the dark
Your light no longer shines

Your light no longer shines...
Your light no longer shines...

John Derek Hamilton
August 5,2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 12, 2023 at 7:54 AM
John, your song is masterfully crafted. Its profound resonance and exquisite composition allow it to penetrate the depths of one's soul, forging an undeniable connection. Your poetic prowess effortlessly captures the intricate tapestry of human emotions, unveiling the full spectrum of our shared experiences.
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Wow thanks dear Poet, your comment is actually more poetic than my song, lol! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Breidenthal Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Wonderful and beautiful lyric!
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Wow thanks for your generous comment, welcome to my page!
Daniel Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 4:07 AM
Such a sadly beautiful song, John, that truly tugs at the heartstrings:)
Hamilton Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Thanks Jo I'm glad you liked it and came by to visit today, I do appreciate your kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:05 PM
hey where have you been? I think it's been a while since I got a visit from you. Anyway, I really like your song. I especially love that chorus. So creative.
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Thanks Andrea, yeah feeling more inspired lately, glad to have you pass by today.
Sands Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Yes, this is what I am talking about! Powerful for sure. I can feel your words deeply and you write beautiful songs that can reach deeply and be related to. Excellent John! :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Thanks Heidi glad you liked it enough to leave a generous comment. Your comments do tend to spur me on to better things so thanks so much!
Kauffman Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 10:52 AM
John, your lyrics have always had power - power to express the whole dynamic of emotions especially the starkness of a broken heart! Welcome back! You have been missed! So looking forward to more lyrical/poetic bliss. Blessings!
Kauffman Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Wonderful news, John! Can't wait to be inspired by your words! Blessings!
Hamilton Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Thanks Sam for passing by and leaving kind words of encouragement. I feel like my inspiration is coming back, so hopefully better writes on the way!
Ashley Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Dear John, your lyrical pen laments the loss of a love or a muse or a spiritual presence with anguished beauty. Rich imagery filled with emotion. "Yeah now here in the dark / Your light no longer shines". The sad bewildering feeling of loss and abandonment is palpable. So great to see you posting again, John. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 8:04 PM
Thanks Susan for your kind words. It's my first offering in two years so a little simple but thanks for your encouragement. JD
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