Here I Stand and Face the Rain

I stand before you in this rain
You keep dry in the open doorway
Fully aware of this growing pain
Waiting silently till something, you say

I step towards you, but I refrain
For breaking your heart, this price I pay
At the threshold you remain
Standing here soaking, I will stay 

Thoughts rush inside, like a pounding train
Wondering when, my heart, you’ll slay
Any second now, you’ll leave me maim 
Please forgive me; I hope, I pray

You close the door, but at least you came
I said I could take it, come what may
But now the tears in mine eyes won’t tame
The fibers of my very heart begin to fray. 

I knew I shouldn’t have tried to attain 
A soothing forgiveness, how cliché
I should never have hoped, you’d be humane
Never the less my heart’s in dismay

I truly hoped you'ld feel the same
the tenderness from yesterday
But I accept your burning blame
For you are the one I did betray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/29/2016 12:56:00 PM
wonderful flow,welcome to Soup.
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Date: 5/29/2016 1:27:00 AM
Well done Amber...Great write!
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Date: 5/16/2016 12:01:00 AM
Well done. Poignant!
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:27:00 PM
Great first write here on PS Amber, welcome to the site, hope you love it here. Really enjoyed this!
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:48:00 AM
Amber, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:53:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Amber. :)
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Date: 4/29/2016 6:53:00 AM
What a lovely, sad, & extremely pensive expression of your emotions. Your piece has truly moved me. Your hardcore honesty is expressed so powerfully!! This is in the LEAST the form of rhyme, I am sure it could even be more specific. Live & learn is all we humans can hope to do:)..peace, love, light, & self forgiveness for you, jill
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Date: 7/12/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious words, and I'm super happy you enjoyed my poem. ??- A.B.
Date: 4/29/2016 6:38:00 AM
Amber, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/29/2016 5:25:00 AM
Powerful piece, Amber - great wording. A WARM WELCOME to PoetrySoup. Please, make yourself at home. Hoping you blossom in this vibrant community, and meet lots of awesome people. ~Michael
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Date: 4/29/2016 4:59:00 AM
Hi Amber, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 7/12/2016 8:12:00 PM
I can't thank you enough for being my very first commenter! And I'm glad to be on poetry soup. - A.B.
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