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Here I Am

Here I am Queen Of things unperceived My skin shimmers with an iridescent sheen The sun shines crystalizing me I slow down my motions Meditating in silence Opening up my emotions Creating peace and quiet I ponder my existence My relative subsistence Soaking up the earth Feeling gravities resistance Restraining my body from floating forth I begin my ascension Leaving the 3rd dimension Entering unknown realms Exploring without apprehension Releasing my spirit from its physical state My shape is insubstantial I’ve opened an invisible gate Here I am Queen Of things I perceive My consciousness My spirit, my soul Is what makes me whole Here I am ethereal My body doesn’t exist Made up of cosmic material I will infinitely persist

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/14/2016 11:09:00 AM

Hi Rachel. Welcome to Poetry Soup, and congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2016 3:39:00 PM

Rachel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ggg Bbb

Date: 4/5/2016 12:29:00 PM

was nice to read this, that was close to my feelings! thank you^ and welcome^ hope to hear more and more from you^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2016 8:17:00 PM

Rachel,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rachel Bennett
Date: 4/5/2016 9:03:00 AM