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Here I Am

When, in the night, your strength slowly wanes your future a dark unknown even left to breathe as you grapple demons inflicted ghostly pains and stare into swirling abyss not of your weave Alas! The end no sight seen upon which to cleave Here I am, the pillar of my body still stands there to surround the air while your fight continues on in my arms solid cradle, rest against swollen glare and when the morning comes in the pink of dawn I will lift you up even through my shredded song For you are my angel given me my humbled life on that spoken day of youth, you as my sighing bride I’ve held your hand though all the love and lowly strife Crossed each bridge over waters raged or blue aside Now, in this untested darkness, tear down my pride What you need and desire freely, I will try to give if the journeys given test is for months or years be no matter, each day a gift to completely live though I pray, beckon you to clearly fought cheers while I hold you tonight adrift in this hells sphere 9-27-2020
Brain Strand Your Choice #17 1st place

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Date: 9/28/2020 7:28:00 PM
A gorgeous poem, Jeanne. So well-crafted. Congrats on your well-deserved win. :) gw
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/3/2020 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Gershon...it is so heartbreaking to have friends going through rough times.
Date: 9/28/2020 12:49:00 AM
Nicely penned...Congrats on your win Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/3/2020 9:36:00 AM
Hi Carol,, thanks so much.
Date: 9/27/2020 4:22:00 PM
Hello Jeanne McGee, when i need support I listen to Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata I find this piece soothing to my nerves. I also remember the song When You Walk Through A Storm. This encourages me to be strong. We all need someone to support us through rough times. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2020 5:18:00 AM
Hello Jeanne, my sister had lung cancer. She had one lung removed. She is doing well now. Moonlight sonata is my fav. i listen to it often. It is a calming music for me.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/27/2020 6:51:00 PM
For friends struggling with cancer right now...but so many people go through some terrible sicknesses...I love different music but the Moonlight Sonata is one of my favorites too. Thanks for your insight and comments. Jeanne
Date: 9/27/2020 3:24:00 PM
We all need support someone to be our rock when we are ill or coping with a loved one who is sick - I've got the song 'lean on me' buzzing through my head as i ready your moving poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/27/2020 6:53:00 PM
People who have their "rock" are so lucky...mine is always so far away that I am usually on my own. But it is so comforting to know someone is looking out for you. xoxo

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