Here and Now

In a drop of water
a universe.
In a peony
poetic verse.
In a child’s face
sweet purity.
In just one moment
eternity…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sands Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Excellent. Well done :)
Jeavons Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 10:17 PM
Thank you again Heidi. Will check out some of your work tomorrow. Good night, Susan
Wise Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:36 PM
In a word......WOW! So few words have achieved such depth here. Incredible. :)
Jeavons Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Thank you so much Michael! Sorry it took so long to get back to you all. I just came home from the hospital today. I;ll try to read as many poems as I can. Thanks again. Blessing!
Godwin Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:17 PM
Applause! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Jeavons Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Thank you. Thank You. (I am taking a bow.) Poetry Hugs back CayCay. Susan
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:30 PM
I just on moment good work Susan.
Jeavons Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Sorry I missed this Okonkwo. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem. Blessings, Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 9:53 PM
sweet purity has never been described more succinctly, Susan.
Jeavons Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Thank you Caren. I will try to read more of your work too. Blessings, Susan
Staton Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 8:45 PM
So much stated in so few words. Love it!
Jeavons Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Thank you Valerie. Blessings. Susan
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