Her Wonderful Mother Nature

HER WONDERFUL MOTHER NATURE


Once upon her entering and exiting  
Her comings and goings
Groceries, gym or mall
Mother Nature made the mirrors love her
All-knowing reflection,  
No adjustments needed... 
Please...not one correction
Causing confusion, she's unflawed
Everywhere, in every room, claiming, stealing all attention
Gorgeous green eyed-snake women start hissing, 
Salivating, half-dog half-men, jaws stuck, stalled
Remember her...Oh, don't they all?  
She and I, sometimes engage in
A carefully unscripted conversation
And so from mine own imagination...I will share
She leaves the world, with rare...souvenirs 
Letting us know she was near
A trace of her intimidating yet inviting, invisible scent
Where her valuable diamond time was spent
But none free to spare 
A lost, left behind, strand of hair
A walking razor
Her shadow click-clacks in,  
Legs, classily crossed ladylike, saddled that lucky chair 
Sipped only a pair of cocktails, 
Her figure a musical note, a cursive signature, 
Her FORM flows, dips smooth and full
Stunning, so easily capturing us all
Her smile, does accurately spell 
The wonderful definition of the word Beautiful...
Look her up in the dictionary my friend
For she is a non-fictional woman 
Strong-her world has gravitational pull you apart
Aquarius without a speck of ugliness
In February she effortlessly 
Valentines a fool's heart 
Can never look messily
That is quite improbably, an impossibility
Surreally painted together perfectly 
Like a Dali nude canvass on art, 
Breathing...responding...moving
Wonderful Mother Nature, knew exactly what she was doing
Marvelously done, on her part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/17/2016 9:12:00 AM
Great imagery, I like it. Welcome to PoetrySoup, I'm new here too, lots of great writers to visit and read -DC
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/17/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you DC.... This seems like a great place for writers to be.
Date: 8/11/2016 6:13:00 PM
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Poet Destroyer A. I look forward to sharing my pieces....
Date: 8/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thank you for sharing, Gregory. Skat
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Date: 8/11/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Skat....I feel welcomed already
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