Her Whispers

A gondola ride Suns warmth, waters glistening While softly I smile Your melodious whispers Freeing butterflies in me

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2012 10:51:00 PM

ooh lala, how you do write!!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/13/2012 10:52:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much my dear friend, I appreciate your comment. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/13/2012 8:58:00 PM

Wow, you are very good at these short verses! I enjoy writing short poems as well, but I have decided to try and work on longer poems as well...both are challenging in their own way! This is a fascinating piece Rollo! Very nicely put together and masterfully done! I'm glad to see you try out the Tanka, I love that form, might be my favorite one! Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/13/2012 9:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Russell for coming by and reading my Tanka, and your great commentary. Rollo