Her Whispers

A gondola ride Suns warmth, waters glistening While softly I smile Your melodious whispers Freeing butterflies in me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:51 PM
ooh lala, how you do write!!!
West Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:52 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so much my dear friend, I appreciate your comment. Rollo
Sivey Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:58 PM
Wow, you are very good at these short verses! I enjoy writing short poems as well, but I have decided to try and work on longer poems as well...both are challenging in their own way! This is a fascinating piece Rollo! Very nicely put together and masterfully done! I'm glad to see you try out the Tanka, I love that form, might be my favorite one! Great Work!!
West Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so much Russell for coming by and reading my Tanka, and your great commentary. Rollo
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