Her Ways

footprints in the beach are her ways of saying "don't stop my heart is ready to open" just when i raed where they lead a Jealous wave swallows them
                  come oh! wise man of the few read where it leads

a distant signboard in thick darkness are her actions of saying "tell me you need me, i will tell you i need you more" but i cant see the arrows head
        should i turn
                        should i stop
                                          should i head on

traffic lights in misty mornings for a color blind aged are her ways of saying "my heart, i trust you with"  i see the dying light but what is it green
                                                                           is it yellow
                                                                              is it red
come oh young man of eagles vision tell me
                                                                     should i head on
                                                                         should i be ready 
                                                                              should i stop
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 8:05 PM
Patrick, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 9:15 AM
There are many mysteries along her pathways. I would head on.
Nigros Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 3:21 AM
Yes Richard, I will head on as well.... Thanks....
A   Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 6:56 AM
hello, Patrick ooo.yes you should hold on. This is a very good poem. I like the idea and footprint beginning. hope you figure out the messages in your heart. luv . Linda
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September 18, 2014 at 3:23 AM
I will head on Linda,,,
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October 22, 2013 at 4:57 AM
thank you.....
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