Her Ways

footprints in the beach are her ways of saying "don't stop my heart is ready to open" just when i raed where they lead a Jealous wave swallows them
                  come oh! wise man of the few read where it leads

a distant signboard in thick darkness are her actions of saying "tell me you need me, i will tell you i need you more" but i cant see the arrows head
        should i turn
                        should i stop
                                          should i head on

traffic lights in misty mornings for a color blind aged are her ways of saying "my heart, i trust you with"  i see the dying light but what is it green
                                                                           is it yellow
                                                                              is it red
come oh young man of eagles vision tell me
                                                                     should i head on
                                                                         should i be ready 
                                                                              should i stop

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Date: 4/2/2015 8:05:00 PM
Patrick, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:15:00 AM
There are many mysteries along her pathways. I would head on.
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Date: 9/18/2014 3:21:00 AM
Yes Richard, I will head on as well.... Thanks....
Date: 10/17/2013 6:56:00 AM
hello, Patrick ooo.yes you should hold on. This is a very good poem. I like the idea and footprint beginning. hope you figure out the messages in your heart. luv . Linda
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Patrick Nigros
Date: 9/18/2014 3:23:00 AM
I will head on Linda,,,
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Patrick Nigros
Date: 10/22/2013 4:57:00 AM
thank you.....
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