Black Eyed Susan Poet Rhyme

Her Unfortunate Asexuality

Now that I’ve seen her wedding ring
She’s unattractive, merely a “thing”
Stripped of all femininity – 
If only my body would agree!



**Received Honorable Mention in "any 1st year poem on ps contest"

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The Situation December 22, 2011 at 7:40 PM i wonder if i could get this secret massage in but how do i start how do i begin. "that's what freaks are for" T.S. The Situation December 22, 2011 at 7:40 PM must be true. sex sells.

Caryl Muzzey July 14, 2011 at 1:06 PM Congratulations Susan on your wonderful poem winning in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Doris Culverhouse June 30, 2011 at 7:48 AM congrats on the hm

Carol Sunshine Brown June 29, 2011 at 5:56 AM Congratulations Susan on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 28, 2011 at 3:02 PM Congrats Susan on your HM in the contest ..an excellent entry .. profound words luv..special honor...

Zzzzz Zzzzz June 27, 2011 at 11:30 AM Interesting write. A change in status often changes nothing really, only in the mind.

James Fraser June 23, 2011 at 11:58 AM A so out there view of society Susan. This scene has been played out so many times throughout history. Nice one, enjoyed :)

Jack Horne June 22, 2011 at 1:44 PM I love this, Susan - yes, how hard it is sometimes to view someone else's wife without lust! A sure winner

Nette Onclaud June 22, 2011 at 5:14 AM no desire then??... inriguing piece, susan; winning wishes..:) huggs, nette