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Her Unfortunate Asexuality

Now that I’ve seen her wedding ring She’s unattractive, merely a “thing” Stripped of all femininity – If only my body would agree! **Received Honorable Mention in "any 1st year poem on ps contest"

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The Situation

Date: 12/22/2011 7:40:00 PM

i wonder if i could get this secret massage in but how do i start how do i begin. "that's what freaks are for" T.S.

The Situation
Date: 12/22/2011 7:40:00 PM

must be true. sex sells.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/14/2011 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations Susan on your wonderful poem winning in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/30/2011 7:48:00 AM

congrats on the hm

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 3:02:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your HM in the contest ..an excellent entry .. profound words luv..special honor...

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/27/2011 11:30:00 AM

Interesting write. A change in status often changes nothing really, only in the mind.

James Fraser

Date: 6/23/2011 11:58:00 AM

A so out there view of society Susan. This scene has been played out so many times throughout history. Nice one, enjoyed :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/22/2011 1:44:00 PM

I love this, Susan - yes, how hard it is sometimes to view someone else's wife without lust! A sure winner

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2011 5:14:00 AM

no desire then??... inriguing piece, susan; winning wishes..:) huggs, nette