Her Tone Was Harsh
he did not respond
she said something generic
but her tone was harsh
he did not argue
she approached him angrily
did not work at all
he took some deep breaths
as he watched her veins popping
she was no expert
he left quietly
because rage had blinded her
and she could not see
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