James Peranteau Poet Carpe Diem

Her Surrender

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                   Soft
              and gentle
      the feel to mine digits
                    as
         the soft of powder

              With desire
    her flesh she did expose
                 and I
             the wanted
                wanted

                  Yes
             I did touch
            The tight wet
And the purr she did surrender

              rendering 
       the unmanageable
                scream

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Elizabeth Wesley January 12, 2012 at 7:48 PM Hauntingly beautiful! The exotic way you render the not so subtle expressions of the experience is enough to melt a stone!

Stephen Parker April 4, 2011 at 6:23 PM The mystical aura shrouds the body heat in this poem. Is the desire inbred or coaxed? A nice job of combining the masculine desire for the soft folds with the feminine desire for that gentle touch.

Gerard Keogh Jr. March 1, 2011 at 6:34 PM This is worthjy of Ovid. You did this so well. Top mark for you here! regards, Gerard

Wilma Neels February 19, 2011 at 12:07 PM James, dropping by to say hello, enjoy your weekend :) love W

Honesty Oimbo January 26, 2011 at 4:43 AM this poem is nicely presented such that the reader wants to read it again and again

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 25, 2011 at 10:33 AM hoo wow you sure got a sizzler here, James--- :) keep writing :) -- nikko :)

Daver Austin January 25, 2011 at 8:25 AM Too numb to tickle, Sir James. A horrendously exotic opus, Sir James. Fortunately, my pacemaker is working properly so I did not have a coronary. Scorchingly wonderful opus. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 25, 2011 at 5:14 AM James ...your words of sweet comments are as mellow raindrops falling on lovers my friend... gracious and nurturing... thankxx so much for enjoying my poetry as I most certainly do yours luv.. shortly will post a new luv poem.. back to my roots...luv.. happy day..

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2011 at 11:03 PM Sensuous indeed, James!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 24, 2011 at 7:14 PM thankxx James for reading so many of my writes today.. appreciate the warm comments and luv my friend... awesome blog too my friend.. keep it going luv..

Wilma Neels January 24, 2011 at 1:20 PM James a sensual and passionate write, made me smile ;) love Wilma

John Loving Iii January 24, 2011 at 9:25 AM i am so tempted to comment on this piece. but my status forbids me from doing so. even though i am as loose as they come. i cant risk getting kicked off the site. sorrrry. John H Loving

Nette Onclaud January 23, 2011 at 11:20 AM whooo... the soft flame of sensuality ignites, james!! astounding! :) huggs, nette

Destini Williams January 23, 2011 at 10:04 AM whoa! nice once lol... very beautiful and sensual

Deb Radke January 23, 2011 at 8:10 AM Beautifully written. A soft, trembling tribute to love shouts from your words. Thank you for posting this wonderful description of love's surrender. Best wishes. Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 23, 2011 at 8:05 AM James u have done it again my friend...with your powerful words setting scenes of luv and intimacy ... think u might enjoy both "Energized" and "Threesome" recently posted for contests luv... nothing excites like a luv poem my friend... happy Sunday..

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2011 at 7:42 AM Good morning James, stopping by to say Hi! and a super wow! what a surrender James,, wow! wow!.. sorry but the image can lead to some hot thoughts.. enjoyedd your poem,,.. Unmangeable.. screamm..imagine that... thanks for this one,,, Linda

Royal Trevino January 23, 2011 at 7:34 AM Nice poem of passion =(^.^)= Royal

Debbie Guzzi January 23, 2011 at 6:55 AM 2) You are writing lots of free verse I love Free Verse, the world stage is predominately using Free Verse and Blank Verse, poets on this site don't seem to "get it?" and therefore, they may not "like it?" then they don't say anything rather than say a negative. Light & Love [If you soup mail me when you post a Free Verse I will read & comment ;)]

Debbie Guzzi January 23, 2011 at 6:54 AM Wow what an ending just the way you wanted I'm sure I fell right off the cliff. I have 2 things to tell you 1 folks here comment less on sexually provacative things, being a heavily Christian site the beauty and joy of the flesh is difficult for them to respond to in a positive way [I believe] so in kindness and confusion they don't respond .

Kory Calhoun January 23, 2011 at 6:42 AM Great poem, James. Very erotic and sensual. Best wishes, KC

Dr.Ram Mehta January 23, 2011 at 5:33 AM Sensual and hot expressions, James

Carolyn Devonshire January 23, 2011 at 5:28 AM Very erotic, my friend. Guess I need to take a cold shower now, James. You got me "heated up," so to speak. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn