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Her Surrender

. Soft and gentle the feel to mine digits as the soft of powder With desire her flesh she did expose and I the wanted wanted Yes I did touch The tight wet And the purr she did surrender rendering the unmanageable scream

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/12/2012 7:48:00 PM

Hauntingly beautiful! The exotic way you render the not so subtle expressions of the experience is enough to melt a stone!

Stephen Parker

Date: 4/4/2011 6:23:00 PM

The mystical aura shrouds the body heat in this poem. Is the desire inbred or coaxed? A nice job of combining the masculine desire for the soft folds with the feminine desire for that gentle touch.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:34:00 PM

This is worthjy of Ovid. You did this so well. Top mark for you here! regards, Gerard

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/19/2011 12:07:00 PM

James, dropping by to say hello, enjoy your weekend :) love W

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 1/26/2011 4:43:00 AM

this poem is nicely presented such that the reader wants to read it again and again

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/25/2011 10:33:00 AM

hoo wow you sure got a sizzler here, James--- :) keep writing :) -- nikko :)

Daver Austin

Date: 1/25/2011 8:25:00 AM

Too numb to tickle, Sir James. A horrendously exotic opus, Sir James. Fortunately, my pacemaker is working properly so I did not have a coronary. Scorchingly wonderful opus. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 5:14:00 AM

James ...your words of sweet comments are as mellow raindrops falling on lovers my friend... gracious and nurturing... thankxx so much for enjoying my poetry as I most certainly do yours luv.. shortly will post a new luv poem.. back to my roots...luv.. happy day..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 11:03:00 PM

Sensuous indeed, James!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 7:14:00 PM

thankxx James for reading so many of my writes today.. appreciate the warm comments and luv my friend... awesome blog too my friend.. keep it going luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/24/2011 1:20:00 PM

James a sensual and passionate write, made me smile ;) love Wilma

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/24/2011 9:25:00 AM

i am so tempted to comment on this piece. but my status forbids me from doing so. even though i am as loose as they come. i cant risk getting kicked off the site. sorrrry. John H Loving

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/23/2011 11:20:00 AM

whooo... the soft flame of sensuality ignites, james!! astounding! :) huggs, nette

Destini Williams

Date: 1/23/2011 10:04:00 AM

whoa! nice once lol... very beautiful and sensual

Deb Radke

Date: 1/23/2011 8:10:00 AM

Beautifully written. A soft, trembling tribute to love shouts from your words. Thank you for posting this wonderful description of love's surrender. Best wishes. Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2011 8:05:00 AM

James u have done it again my friend...with your powerful words setting scenes of luv and intimacy ... think u might enjoy both "Energized" and "Threesome" recently posted for contests luv... nothing excites like a luv poem my friend... happy Sunday..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 7:42:00 AM

Good morning James, stopping by to say Hi! and a super wow! what a surrender James,, wow! wow!.. sorry but the image can lead to some hot thoughts.. enjoyedd your poem,,.. Unmangeable.. screamm..imagine that... thanks for this one,,, Linda

Royal Trevino

Date: 1/23/2011 7:34:00 AM

Nice poem of passion =(^.^)= Royal

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/23/2011 6:55:00 AM

2) You are writing lots of free verse I love Free Verse, the world stage is predominately using Free Verse and Blank Verse, poets on this site don't seem to "get it?" and therefore, they may not "like it?" then they don't say anything rather than say a negative. Light & Love [If you soup mail me when you post a Free Verse I will read & comment ;)]

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/23/2011 6:54:00 AM

Wow what an ending just the way you wanted I'm sure I fell right off the cliff. I have 2 things to tell you 1 folks here comment less on sexually provacative things, being a heavily Christian site the beauty and joy of the flesh is difficult for them to respond to in a positive way [I believe] so in kindness and confusion they don't respond .

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/23/2011 6:42:00 AM

Great poem, James. Very erotic and sensual. Best wishes, KC

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 5:33:00 AM

Sensual and hot expressions, James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2011 5:28:00 AM

Very erotic, my friend. Guess I need to take a cold shower now, James. You got me "heated up," so to speak. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn