Notes About The Poem
To my mother who dared enroll 2 college courses , a first attempt in her school...and passed it.

Her Soul Deviant And Divine

More often, her soul widens 
farther than breaths of a moon... 
and through irreverent  eyes,
 she saunters into the ledge of woods
past time's curfew and nobility --
a wanton stroll by this sylph
daring the commoness of old rules--

Twirling along pebbles and sand, 
kindling night's liniment glorious 
like the flared climb of dusk,
her wildfire spews a wanton blaze ----
fearless like some insolent woman
rising from mediocrity, burning oil

while dragonflies sleep in a lull ;

her navel radiant in the flickering,
feathering night with such 
stubborn will...a maverick defying
traditional anthems of her nun's school. 

Yet, this flared essence turns into warmth
as she tenderly flushes my fears at night
 to hold the moon soft blue 
 while her arms delight in classic tunes,
cleansing my tears with hums 
of ardor...and wings spread on 
hope's ride divinely beaming with grace:
Mother.
Mama- light tenderly cuddles me;
each sky, each ream of grass 
healing my rough, young adult soul...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 28, 2026 at 8:01 AM
Sweet idea, always difficult when we take on too much... Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:01 PM
this work is compelling, Nette- a nice tribute to your mother <3
Rolland Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 3:56 PM
this is so emotional ;remembered my mum, and nice alliterations , thanks dear poet
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 2:07 PM
Ahhh!!! A work that honors your mother. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing it with us. 👏✍️ Sara K.
Rodgers Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 9:08 AM
Dear Nette, I think your poem moves like someone walking a line between mischief and mercy. I felt the wildness first, the woman who breaks curfew, who lights the night on fire and refuses the old rules. I love how you show how the same person can be both reckless and healing without needing to explain the change. Great Work! Blessings, Daniel
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August 11, 2026 at 8:22 AM
Awwn dear Nette, this is so powerful and resilience and a beautiful tribute for your mother! Often society keeps us chained in norms and unjustifiable labels, but breaking free through the shackles reflects real strength! So many words that you've inked here that I sincerely adore "her soul widens farther than breaths of a moon..." How stunning! "a wanton stroll by this sylph daring the commoness of old rules-" Ahh rewriting those old rules.. really adore the use of dragonflies too.. I felt those ending lines deeply "Mama- light tenderly cuddles me; each sky, each ream of grass healing my rough, young adult soul..." Gosh.. we realise later in the years.. for me, my mum is my strongest pillar and the most resilient n powerful woman I've ever known.. and your words really landed on my heart. Sending you light and best wishes always, hugszzz 💫💫🌹🌹❤️‍🩹
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August 11, 2026 at 7:30 AM
fearless like some insolent woman rising from mediocrity, burning oil… Mother. Mama- light tenderly cuddles me; each sky, each ream of grass …we learn (for me especially when mom died) that she wore many hats..but then my thoughts circled back around…but she was my mother. Hugs
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