Her Smile Was Like the Dawn

Her smile was like the dawning sun
Illuminating colors in my life; 
Yet comes dusk she'll be reduced
Into a figment of my mind.

The joy brought by the thought of her
Is the woe of my emptiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/16/2012 4:46:00 PM
Robert, very deep and sad with the empty feeling one can leave..xox~pd
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