Her Smile Was Like the Dawn

Her smile was like the dawning sun
Illuminating colors in my life; 
Yet comes dusk she'll be reduced
Into a figment of my mind.

The joy brought by the thought of her
Is the woe of my emptiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 16, 2012 at 4:46 PM
Robert, very deep and sad with the empty feeling one can leave..xox~pd
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