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" FEELINGS OF LOVE"  FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Her Smile

Her smile thawed mistrust.

Her looks opened his heart wide--
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Blooming are love's fields! 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
       02 June 2018

* This little poem was chosen as POTD. 
Thank all my friends for their gracious support and also
I thank the PS officials for the honor!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Fantastic imagery, Demetrios. Hugs Eve
Williams Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 12:27 AM
What a beautiful way of expressing a smile, I can see why it was chosen as POTD, my congratulations my dearest friend Demetrios....Maria xxx
Ashley Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 10:41 PM
A warm smile speaks a thousand loving words.. A beautiful haiku, Demetrios. Congratulations on your wonderful POTD honors. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
Mckeithan Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Beautiful Haiku. A woman's smile does brighten a day. Well done and conrats. for POTD. Oliver
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Wonderful work Demetrios, congratulations on your honor...
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Charlie each time I see you , I have good news. Hope to see you soon. Haha! Thank you!
Wanter Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:45 AM
The basis of romantic love in a "simple" haiku! Congratulations!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Oh my friend, Sunlite, what a tender comment! Thank you!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Delighted to be back with potd congratulations sweet D! Have a smashing good day my friend! xomo :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Sweet friend, Maureen. Thank you so much!
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:04 AM
- ME HAPPY ... CONGRATULATIONS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:20 PM
My gracious friend, Anne-Lise, thank you so much for your support! Hugs xxx
Pandit Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Back with congrats my friend, on poem of the day.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:19 PM
So great to receive your congratulations dear friend, Vijay! Thank you!
Bateman Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Excellent Haiku Demetrios!! Congratulations on the POTD honor!! The last verse says it all. Best Always, Gary
Bateman Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Kein Problem Herr Professor!! Besten Dank, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Mein freund Garry! Thank you so much for your gracious visit and comment!
Warrior Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Congrats!!! dear friend on your POTD!...well done Demetrios...love and light...^WW^
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:17 PM
My friend, WW, so kind of you! Thank you!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 3:50 AM
Happy for you dear Demetrios for the recognition! That's every poet's reward.. Giving credit to their write is a new reviving breath in the poet's soul and pen! Congratulations on your POTD! A well deserved acknowledgement! Shine wherever you set your pen.. Stay bright and blessed.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 4:53 AM
Delighted to read you generous comment my fried, Besma! Thank you from the depths of my heart for your noble words! God bless you!
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:20 AM
Back with congratulations Demetrios on POTD. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 2:05 AM
My dearest friend, Tom, not only you were the first to comment but also the first to bring me the good news. God bless you!
Kinch  Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Blooming lovely words Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 2:06 AM
Elizabeth, my dear, so happy to see you after so long. Thank you!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Sweet lines dear poet! :) xomo!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you sweet friend, Maureen! xoxo
Sands Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Wow Demetrios! I just love this poem and the photo too! Thanks for sharing this favorite of mine :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Happy you did love it dear, Heidi! Thank you so much for your kindness!
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 7:26 AM
- A heavenly smile ... wonderfully written my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Thank you dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your warm comment! Hugs xxx
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:27 AM
Such precious words my friend..so true..what a smile will do.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:34 AM
Thank you very much my kind friend, , Vijay!
Michael Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 3:38 AM
The walls fall down...All the best Demetrios
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Oh yes, nothing can withstand the force of love my friend, Arturo! Thank you!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 3:00 AM
An exquisite depiction of human nature in refined well chosen words! A unique vivid imagery! Enjoyed reading over and over. A FAV Haiku. Thank you for sharing your beauties dear Demetrios. Stay bright.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:33 AM
I am delighted with your gracious comment dearest friend, Besma! Thank you so much!
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 2:48 AM
A beautiful smile encourages trust, paving the way for romance.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:32 AM
I think so my friend, Tom and I am happy you think so too! thank you!
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