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Her Red Lips, I Love Her Red Lips

Those lips, 
Her lips, 
I love her red lips, 
I want to kiss her bright shiny red lips.
And those hips,
Her hips,
I love her hot hips,
I want to dance with her swaying hot hips.

Every day when she walks past my shop window,
My heart stops, my everything ceases to matter.
And she just keeps on walking, not caring or seeing,
Just walking leaving my passion all a tatter.

And her hair,
That hair,
I love her red hair,
I want to feel the purity of her curly long hair.
But I stare,
I just stare,
All I can do is just stare,
I want to be better than a guy with a blind stare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lewis  Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Ahhh just speak to her lol brill hun
Ainsley Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 10:25 PM
lovely, I enjoyed this ,Like the song "The Girl From Ipanima" I've miss spelled that but love the song and your poem Lewis.Always more light Thalia.
Gupta Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Lovely ... The unsaid transcending the said lines is beautiful ...
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