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Her Purest Form

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Her Purest Form

She was like a rubex cube as he solved one part of her she would bury herself as though she didn't want to be discovered until finally he had unlocked what she had been hiding underneath it all he looked at her as she laid on the bed and revealed the most deepest parts of her that she remained embarrassed to show it was pain, fear, distrust, and hatred as he examined her body he could tell he was not her first she was raped causing her to harden her heart, tears dropped from his face onto her body she leaned up and bit his ear and said do not cry for he only broke my vessel but my heart beats only for you he tightened his grip around her spread out hands and said I will be the gate that holds all your secrets and take away your burdens and as he opened his eyes to gaze at her he saw "HER PUREST FORM".

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