Ct Duet Poet Free verse

Her Name Was Rain

Rain, if you were warm I would dance in you, 
I would be like the breeze and whip around you 
Rain, since you are cold I'll stay away from you 
Its such a bummer cause I want to play with you. 

Thoughts of running through the rain with you 
Makes my heart go insane for you 
I'll hold your hand and slow dance with you 
Alone in the grassy meadow just me and you 

What would I give to beat along with you 
Dripping on the tin shed of the roof with you 
Making sweet music on the wind chimes with you 
Wet and soft on a blanket in the fields with you 

Rain, I'd spend the entire night with you 
Enjoying the touch and feel of you 
No looking back when I'm with you 
Rain oh how I would love to dance in you 

Rain how intense is that storm the comes with you 
The thunder and lightening that stays with you 
Its okay because I still want to change with you 
Rain oh how I want to become one with you.




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 Ayesha Karim 


Date: 5/25/2014 11:41:00 PM 

  This poem is not so good. It is like a dramatic monologue. Be more poetic this is supposed to be a poem. Yikes!

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Jan Allison December 1, 2014 at 12:04 PM congrats on win with a your poem that sucks Tim and Cas:-) Hugs Jan x

Maurice Yvonne December 1, 2014 at 8:58 AM Congratulations on your win, you have to go back five pages to see the results for this poem. The comment on this poem makes no sense, I suspect it is a hoax. There are a very few fake accounts on here that like to cause waves. This is a fine poem beaufitly written.

Tim Smith May 27, 2014 at 6:50 PM We wrote this while Casarah was in a rain storm.

Ayesha Karim May 25, 2014 at 11:41 PM This poem is not so good. It is like a dramatic monologue. Be more poetic this is supposed to be a poem. Yikes! Casarah Nance May 26, 2014 at 11:15 AM ayesha, I am sorry that you did not enjoy the poem. It is ranked 7th for this months hottest, however, so we will not change a drop of it. thank you for your opinion. not every one will like everything they read.