Deb M Poet Rhyme

-Her Name Is Ocean

Mother Natures child ….her name is Ocean
Independent , abundant with emotion
When her body of water is clean
Her mood is calm and serene

Countless days she is displeased with mankind
With those humans who are ignorant and blind
Treating her as a garbage bin
Just heaving their rubbish in

The days her waves crash with rage
Her anger has ascended to the next stage
Watching her marine life dying or distressed
From those humans who couldn’t care less

Aware mankind is working toward positive change
Dedication and education maintained
In time no longer a-washed with debris
Her marine life protected and free

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Paula Goldsmith October 22, 2024 at 2:58 PM I love this write. I also love the ocean. I wish I loved near the water... Have a great day writing away............... Deb M September 29, 2025 at 5:54 AM Thanks Paula….Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers October 22, 2024 at 5:11 AM Dear Deb, A great poem about saving our seas and oceans. I am with you 100% that humans do not own the land. It is only given to us, and we must show respect and be the caregivers we are called to be. A superb call to action! Autumn, Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Deb M October 22, 2024 at 1:06 PM Changes are slowly being made…. maybe one day with each generation it will get back to how it should be….one can only hope! Thanks Daniel….Debx

Paul Willason October 21, 2024 at 10:27 PM Being near the sea I can identify with the sentiments you have so thoughtfully expressed Deb. Everyday I am a witness to the way we treat our waters...so sad. Keep being a friend to this precious planet of ours, keep writing such poems to remind us all of our sacred duty....take care my dear friend. Deb M October 22, 2024 at 1:02 PM I live near the ocean also Paul and consider myself so lucky to be so near to such a wonderful part of nature. Your comments are poetic in themselves! Thankyou my friend….Debx

Emilia James October 20, 2024 at 3:22 AM It saddens me what mankind is doing to the sea and the planet. Mother nature is warning us more and more and still we ignore her and treat earth like an open bin. Emilia : ) Deb M October 22, 2024 at 12:59 PM So very true my lovely friend! Hopefully the next generation is more aware and treat the planet with more respect but who knows! Thanks Emilia….Debx

John Read October 19, 2024 at 9:56 AM In London they still pump human waste into the sea, humans are the enemy of nature. Have a lovely weekend Deb. Deb M October 22, 2024 at 12:49 PM Ewww ewww not nice!! Thanks John….Debx

Victor Buhagiar October 19, 2024 at 6:46 AM It is good to see our nature fighting to keep a clean slate. Great idea. Hugs. Deb M October 22, 2024 at 12:50 PM It sure is Victor….Cuddles…Debx

Mike Gentile October 19, 2024 at 5:34 AM Deb, your poetically beautiful lines so accurately portray the ignorance that humanity is so capable of! I hope more and more of us become aware. A Happy Saturday to you xxoo Deb M October 22, 2024 at 12:56 PM Thanks Mike for your lovely words….mankind has a bit to answer for! Debx

Tom Cunningham October 19, 2024 at 4:24 AM Sad to see all the pollution in our oceans, mankind is slowly destroying earth, Mother nature will fight back and is already doing so. Tom Deb M October 22, 2024 at 12:53 PM Three cheers for Mother Nature l say Tom !! Thankyou ..lDebx

Jennifer Proxenos October 19, 2024 at 3:05 AM I hope we see the day soon DEB., Marine life and plant life under the now somewhat polluted sea is suffering and it really hurts me. Beautiful write, Be well, Jen. Deb M October 22, 2024 at 12:49 PM Thankyou sweet Jen! Always love seeing you and your comments! Debx