James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Her Naked Walk

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                     Surely you jest

                      Your censure
                         was cold

                    As if you could
                     shackle mine 
                 explosive thoughts
                  of her naked walk
 
                 Her glide-by yours
                      plagued you
                 whilst hern sparkle
                     inclined mine 



*little did my friend know, i frequented
her and her Naturist family's home often ;)

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Elizabeth Wesley October 12, 2011 at 7:56 PM I'll bet you sparkled. The verse certainly does but with subtle grace dear James.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 19, 2011 at 8:41 AM Excellent write James....wow!!!! luv it!!!! smiles....chiquita

Skat A January 17, 2011 at 1:58 PM humm! James, what an interesting walk of tease. cute ending. thanks for sharing~skat

Mirela Petalli January 15, 2011 at 8:25 AM Sweet! I pictured her and her naked walk...really enjoyed it!

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 9:21 AM hmmm, you naughty little boy!! Cute line: her sparkle caught mine! This reminds me of my naked man poem. I ought to post it sometime and no, I don't mind a favz, sweetie!! Luv, Andrea

Honesty Oimbo January 14, 2011 at 5:22 AM the structure and language of this poem interests me

Daver Austin January 13, 2011 at 11:39 AM I definitely am still plagued by that elapse. Seldom do you get the chance to view such a state of undress. Naughty Sir James, but explosive. Love, Dave

Wilma Neels January 13, 2011 at 4:13 AM That lines are so true, outsiders cannot control our thoughts.. Interesting James, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire January 12, 2011 at 8:14 PM Go to her now, James! Don't let anyone hold you back. If she captures your sparkle, you need to breakfree of the shackles. Love your poem, dear friend. Love you too, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2011 at 3:26 PM Interesting thoughts penned..I am wondering about that nudity thing there..Sara

Debbie Guzzi January 12, 2011 at 6:34 AM Ohhhhh really nice write..1 thought the word "elapse" hmmm "eclipse?" anyway LOL please check out the blog photos these are all my photos and your son will like them! Light & Love a swaddled admirer!brrrrr

John Loving Iii January 12, 2011 at 5:18 AM i'm thinking of someone. jhl

Jimmy Anderson January 11, 2011 at 7:32 PM Very nice sensual poem...Jimmy

Audrey Haick January 11, 2011 at 1:10 PM Always interesting, James..enjoyed. Always, Annalise

C.C Bloomsfield January 11, 2011 at 9:59 AM lovely poem James,how are you?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 11, 2011 at 6:00 AM Game playing is such a part of Society these days and teasing too.. luv this piece as always your writes are super unique my friend.. and anything naked stirs my bones..haha..with luv..