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Her Naked Walk

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                     Surely you jest

                      Your censure
                         was cold

                    As if you could
                     shackle mine 
                 explosive thoughts
                  of her naked walk
 
                 Her glide-by yours
                      plagued you
                 whilst hern sparkle
                     inclined mine 



*little did my friend know, i frequented
her and her Naturist family's home often ;)

Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/12/2011 7:56:00 PM I'll bet you sparkled. The verse certainly does but with subtle grace dear James. Login to Reply

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 8/19/2011 8:41:00 AM Excellent write James....wow!!!! luv it!!!! smiles....chiquita Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/17/2011 1:58:00 PM humm! James, what an interesting walk of tease. cute ending. thanks for sharing~skat Login to Reply

Mirela Petalli Date: 1/15/2011 8:25:00 AM Sweet! I pictured her and her naked walk...really enjoyed it! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/14/2011 9:21:00 AM hmmm, you naughty little boy!! Cute line: her sparkle caught mine! This reminds me of my naked man poem. I ought to post it sometime and no, I don't mind a favz, sweetie!! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Honesty Oimbo Date: 1/14/2011 5:22:00 AM the structure and language of this poem interests me Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/13/2011 11:39:00 AM I definitely am still plagued by that elapse. Seldom do you get the chance to view such a state of undress. Naughty Sir James, but explosive. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/13/2011 4:13:00 AM That lines are so true, outsiders cannot control our thoughts.. Interesting James, love Wilma Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/12/2011 8:14:00 PM Go to her now, James! Don't let anyone hold you back. If she captures your sparkle, you need to breakfree of the shackles. Love your poem, dear friend. Love you too, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/12/2011 3:26:00 PM Interesting thoughts penned..I am wondering about that nudity thing there..Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/12/2011 6:34:00 AM Ohhhhh really nice write..1 thought the word "elapse" hmmm "eclipse?" anyway LOL please check out the blog photos these are all my photos and your son will like them! Light & Love a swaddled admirer!brrrrr Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 1/12/2011 5:18:00 AM i'm thinking of someone. jhl Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 1/11/2011 7:32:00 PM Very nice sensual poem...Jimmy Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/11/2011 1:10:00 PM Always interesting, James..enjoyed. Always, Annalise Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 1/11/2011 9:59:00 AM lovely poem James,how are you? Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/11/2011 6:00:00 AM Game playing is such a part of Society these days and teasing too.. luv this piece as always your writes are super unique my friend.. and anything naked stirs my bones..haha..with luv.. Login to Reply