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Her Midnight Dandelion

it flew tipping dewed valleys gleeful melodies to each wandering soul aloof in an eloquent crescents daring fold drifting remedies reminiscing star gazed idyllic desires twinkling a picturesque uplifting in pleasant powdered gleaming faith petals drenched in tapestries twisting laced lavender scented dreams stroking desolate pavements solely on hushed mumbled commands of a wind carried dimmed lantern it flew

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Joseph May

Date: 9/22/2024 2:34:00 PM

Very nicely penned

Tom Woody

Date: 7/7/2024 1:48:00 PM

I have no idea what this is about but it reads beautifully

Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2024 5:30:00 AM

Haha. Thx so much for the explanation. I'm a bit slow on the uptake. It really is an awesome write

Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/7/2024 8:08:00 PM

"Of a wind carried dimmed lantern" symbolizes the dream of a wisher whispered to a dandelion; 'dimmed' because it's not always visible to others, akin to a faint light whose likelihood of realization is uncertain, often seeming unattainable due to circumstances. hope this is insightful enough, tyvm for the feedback!!

Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/7/2024 8:03:00 PM

lool thank yous Tom. To state it simply, this poem portrays the purposeful journey of a dandelion bud carrying the ebullient hopes and wishes of a person who blew a wish, contrasting with the harsh, demanding reality constantly trying to put us down. (in my perspective) Wishing on a dandelion bud makes space for clutched on hopes and dreams in a sanguine spirit.. symbolizing a belief that things will eventually work out for the better-whether or not your most desired wish will come true.

Paige Hind

Date: 7/6/2024 4:57:00 PM

"stroking desolate pavements solely on hushed mumbled commands" wow, go Mi Mi! I enjoyed reading this. <3 A beautiful piece...great subject matter

Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/7/2024 7:31:00 PM