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Her Lover

Her Lover There was no moment of silence No vacant half breathing of poignant momentum The falling stars could not entice from her heart Or burden a single second with the simplest ghost of import The open unwritten pages of her book left devoid of ink-ed blood She does not ponder on the swirling fogs It is those dank and drear mist which contemplate her Darkest expression of nothing Cold walled the clammy plaster and Armour Iron shoveled and buried deep Never to dance all for smiles or walk from the island marooned No spark of life but vacant inspiration No tears other than those wept long ago Are now her only memories of sorrow It is cold now The words of passion and obsession Sleep with their talk on her tongue Her life undone Love she turned her back upon Love she walked away with uncaring grace And a high hand haughty wave With such a fire in her eyes un-kindled Un-eternal And shadow he watched her Grey specter Of no avail his soul traveling with her There in the gnawing desolation of possibility She Left him

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/29/2009 9:42:00 AM
ahhhhhhh yes. That we must to save our own souls from being absorbed. You stick straws in us. Light & Love
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Date: 12/27/2008 8:56:00 AM
Colin - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/26/2008 4:53:00 PM
Powerful and dramatic write here, Colin. It reads like a song and I love "there in the gnawing desolation of possibility" line!! This is a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 12/23/2008 7:44:00 PM
Colin,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Her Lover" Sad Wrenching but a Superb pen I don't mean to be nosey but what do YOU do for a living I ask because YOU have 3 pages of wonderful POETRY since October where do YOU find the time to write so much I work in a restaurant and teach Culinary arts Sorry if I offend YOU I would give anything to have that much time to Write Merry Christmas and may the New Year Bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG
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Date: 12/23/2008 6:12:00 PM
Excellent writing, Colin..Well deserved to be a featured poem this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:53:00 PM
Congrats Colin on "Her Lover" being a well deserved featured poem. Vince
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Date: 12/23/2008 12:59:00 PM
so well writen and cutting to the point. John H Loving III
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Date: 12/23/2008 10:10:00 AM
most excellent verse, heartfelt Light & love Happy holy Days Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 12/23/2008 5:09:00 AM
Lovely poem, congrats on being featured this week.
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Date: 12/22/2008 9:19:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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Date: 12/21/2008 8:53:00 PM
Colin - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:57:00 PM
Well done, and so sad the feelings in this poem. Congratulations on the poem being featured this week!~Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:53:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful, I loved it. Congrats on getting featured this week! God bless! Amy :)
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:06:00 PM
Such a sad , heartwrenching piece.Stunning!! I must say,I like this very much indeed.Beautifully written and exquisitely poignant ,raw emotions run rampant in this poem of epic proportions,lol did I mention I love this poem?Lacy,
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