Her Lovely Lips

Her lovely lips,
Takes a bite,
Of an emotion 
That was not ripe,
Of an emotion
That was not able to grow,
Since her motives turned oh so cold,
Oh so dark,
That no one can see,
The little hope,
That started to gleam,
In the darkest corner,
In the darkest seem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 11, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Today I have stopped back to read more of your excellent poetry Kriss. I will be back again soon and hope to see some more poetry written here by you. If you feel it in your heart then write it as that is where the best poetry comes from. Love, Carol
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August 2, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Very creative and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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