Her Love Was Deeply Hidden
Her love was deeply hidden...
Deeply hidden in disguise,
But I discovered it by chance
Deeply hidden in her eyes.
And that indeed was torment,
For she had to look away--
Promised to another man
Whom she didn't see that way.
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