Her Love Exit -

She spoke about Love as though it were a ghost
that haunted Her heart, a gobblin of garrulous grind & grime,
a spector of weakness that if caught
in the peryphery of One's soul would intensify
as a headache storm swells inexorably into the daytime,
a terror of exposure to vulnerability wrapped
in the voice of a violin chasing a child,
if confronted, it would vanish in the blood of imagination,

oddly, She gave Love to others like a lesson of learned loss,
She couldn't help to care,
wouldn't surrender to it,
but couldn't deny Love to those who believed in it,
a painful condition of starvation for sentient salvation,
an Angel of abused afterthoughts,
I wonder now if She knows
that Love is the metal of Her armor -

J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Shahein Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Gash! What a spectacular , magnificent breath taking poem , it is so touchy if only sge knew how much u love her ....I wish I find someone to love me in this heart taking way someday....u can write a romantic poem in a way that I have never seen...u are a true talented person...hugs and merry Christmas...//:) dalia
Bordner Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Love is so painful for her, because its the only thing that cuts her, yet it is the only thing that heals her too Dalia...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Very moving.....that last line....what a fine encapsulation of it all.....
Bordner Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 1:23 AM
Yeah Eileen, love is our best defense. It can be easy to be suspicious of love. J.A.B.
Anglesey Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 10:38 PM
I shall stay as much of an Angel as possible wearing my most sturdy armor. The vulnerability is the downfall sometime :)
Bordner Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 2:39 PM
A love warrior no doubt Karen - J.A.B. %
Rose Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 10:22 PM
A great read, very touching. Love is the metal of her armor, LOVE that line
Bordner Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Yes Andrea, its the best - Glad that I have received your keen perception - J.A.B. %
Kamau Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Am speechless....The way you play with words just makes the poem so interesting..and yeap...many girls are in such situations..Very GREAT piece indeed.
Bordner Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Our language is an instrument of discovery, cognitively and spiritually Virginia - I'm happy that you appreciate this so clearly - J.A.B. %
Loveless Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 12:08 AM
This is so brilliant and it touches my heart so deeply. If only she knew the ways you speak of her...She sounds like a beautifully wounded person.
Bordner Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 1:47 PM
You helped me to see this beauty more clearly Jay - I am joyed to be in the home of your heart - Thank You - J.A.B. %
Loveless Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 4:22 PM
and wondering who is who. If I am me or if I am her or if I am a mix of the two. Because I can feel her pain and her joy, and I can see through her eyes...Yes my friend I do understand it well. Its a shame that I do so well. One of my all time favorite writes by you.
Loveless Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 4:21 PM
Yes I do understand it...and you have. My heart holds special places for those who have truly made a home there. This write.....it leaves me speachless Justin. It leaves me weak in the knees and gasping for breath
Bordner Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Your response to this write makes me feel as though I've won something irreplaceable Jay - you understand the painjoy well - J.A.B. %
Burch Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 10:56 AM
The more of your work I read the more my tongue becomes strangled by its awe. So gifted you are. Thank you for sharing. Big hug. Deb
Bordner Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 1:43 PM
My gift is only as strong as the souls willing to love it my friend - I am motivated by your praise - thanks Deborah - J.A.B. %
Mac Donald Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Powerful imagery..."a painful condition of starvation for sentient salvation", perhaps this person had been hurt numerous times and this "metal of Her armor" is her only defense? Still it would confine and restrict others. You've been busy with your writes, while I've been lax and lethargic.:) You've much to share, Justin; you are doing well to do so! Love, Mikki
Bordner Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Armor can certainly perform in that capacity Mikki, but at least She has something worth protecting, preserving, modeling for others - no need to to rush the writes my friend, just stay reverent of inspiration and when the time is right you will regain the miestro's wand - thanks for the love - J.A.B. %
Breidenthal Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Marvelously penned 100% loved this. Always, Laura
Bordner Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 1:07 PM
So glad you got some love from this write Laura - stay special - J.A.B. %
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