Her Looks

HER LOOKS

I saw her sweeping the front yard;
Her broom made the place really clean,
But her looks made my mind very dirty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 5, 2015 at 2:09 AM
wonderful verse. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 10:15 PM
I like this poem! I think you should just label it as free verse!
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