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Her Leafless Walk Past I

. Listen please listen Can you hear it it’s the crackling of the sparkles in mine eyne Need i say more *)

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Robert Lindley

Date: 3/26/2015 8:44:00 AM

A GEM. SO LITTLE WRITTEN BUT SO VERY MUCH SAID! A7 from me and sure seems like love lost to me.. Bravooooo.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/27/2015 2:01:00 PM

Almost surreal. I like it when I listen and can hear crackles in the air that seem to come from nowhere. Also seeing microscopic bits in the air by the uncountable numbers. As usual I love your poetry. LOve, daver

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/23/2015 5:03:00 PM

The mind takes us the rest of the way! No more words need be said! How delightful! Your imagery is thought-provoking, strange to me, in the best way...Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/21/2015 4:27:00 PM

A very effective piece considering the economy of words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2015 2:04:00 PM

I enjoyed the read, james!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/21/2015 12:54:00 AM

Lovely James..One can feel the passion and see the fire in the writer's eyes here..