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Her Leafless Walk Past I

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                        Listen
                    please listen

                  Can you hear it

                 it’s the crackling
                  of the sparkles
                   in mine eyne
                       
                     Need i say
                         more






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Robert Lindley Date: 3/26/2015 8:44:00 AM A GEM. SO LITTLE WRITTEN BUT SO VERY MUCH SAID! A7 from me and sure seems like love lost to me.. Bravooooo. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/27/2015 2:01:00 PM Almost surreal. I like it when I listen and can hear crackles in the air that seem to come from nowhere. Also seeing microscopic bits in the air by the uncountable numbers. As usual I love your poetry. LOve, daver Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 1/23/2015 5:03:00 PM The mind takes us the rest of the way! No more words need be said! How delightful! Your imagery is thought-provoking, strange to me, in the best way...Always, Laura Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/21/2015 4:27:00 PM A very effective piece considering the economy of words. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/21/2015 2:04:00 PM I enjoyed the read, james! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/21/2015 12:54:00 AM Lovely James..One can feel the passion and see the fire in the writer's eyes here.. Login to Reply