James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Her Leafless Walk Past I

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                        Listen
                    please listen

                  Can you hear it

                 it’s the crackling
                  of the sparkles
                   in mine eyne
                       
                     Need i say
                         more






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Robert Lindley March 26, 2015 at 8:44 AM A GEM. SO LITTLE WRITTEN BUT SO VERY MUCH SAID! A7 from me and sure seems like love lost to me.. Bravooooo.

Daver Austin January 27, 2015 at 2:01 PM Almost surreal. I like it when I listen and can hear crackles in the air that seem to come from nowhere. Also seeing microscopic bits in the air by the uncountable numbers. As usual I love your poetry. LOve, daver

Laura Breidenthal January 23, 2015 at 5:03 PM The mind takes us the rest of the way! No more words need be said! How delightful! Your imagery is thought-provoking, strange to me, in the best way...Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2015 at 4:27 PM A very effective piece considering the economy of words.

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2015 at 2:04 PM I enjoyed the read, james!

Charmaine Chircop January 21, 2015 at 12:54 AM Lovely James..One can feel the passion and see the fire in the writer's eyes here..