Sharon Ruebel Poet Free verse

Her Last Winter

For Contest: Free Verse






So cold her lips speechless
to soon forgotten loves warmth 
Emptied heart frozen
Pastel rainbows sightless
Darkened clouds dripping overhead
Acid rain remover of all tenderness
wounds bleeding quickly
frozen as candied apples shinning
A soul lay dying with no renewal
of seasons awaiting
Thoughts to painful to keep
simply vanish in the thaw
her last winter...

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Wilma Neels February 11, 2011 at 8:29 AM Sharon, I absolutely love your entry, the vivid imagery and your acid rain line, just did it for me.. Good luck for the contest ;-) love W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2011 at 6:07 AM Those pastel rainbows are the essence of this piece Shar.. much good luck in the contest my friend.. an amazing insight into emotions and luv... good luck my friend with luv..