Her Last Smile

A lonely mentally retarded woman perceived  
The world without knowing its malicious darkness, 
She died many times before her death when
She was raped by some beastly men, 
Suffered many days and months, 
One day she delivered a baby girl, 
That day to her baby’s little hand 
No crescent moon had reached,
No star dropped for her from the sky, 
No one tolled a bell from distant Cathedral,
No song was in the air, no artful flute was blown, 
The woman cast her unseeing look at the society, 
At the civilization around her,
She smiled at her baby, the God smiled too,
Tears rolled down her cheeks, closing her eyes
She left the baby in the hand of God.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/21/2018 8:15:00 PM
Mustofa, a sad scenario expressed with beautiful emotional delicacy and poignancy.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mustofa Munir
Date: 7/22/2018 12:48:00 AM
Susan, Thanks so much for your poetic comment. I extend my best wishes to you.
Date: 7/2/2018 6:49:00 PM
Painful emotions: excellent my friend
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Mustofa Munir
Date: 7/2/2018 7:06:00 PM
My heartfelt thanks to you.
Date: 6/16/2018 8:02:00 AM
I thought this was very good,especially how you bought us to the end.I thought it was emotional and truly beautiful.
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Mustofa Munir
Date: 7/2/2018 7:07:00 PM
I extend my sincerest thanks to you.
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