Notes About The Poem

Her Last Impression

Sun beams accurately placed,
loiter behind cliffs. Shadows
form female face, in lakes fringe.

Legends tell of mature curse
deceitful waters, ensnare.

Unbalanced minds,
death plunging
simulate barnacle geese ~
to inherit her beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:26 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Chamberlain Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Thank you for reading my poem and for taking the time to comment. I rest enjoyed writing this, using the visual. :-)
Lawless Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Some very interesting visuals here Joanna. I had to go back and review the picture and then watch as your poem took flight.
Chamberlain Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 2:29 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment. I let my imagination run wild with this picture. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 7:53 PM
great creativity Those pictures have me stymied.l
Chamberlain Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 1:22 AM
I find a picture really helps to get the creative juices flowing. :-) they were fantastic pictures.
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