Her Last Impression

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Sun beams accurately placed, loiter behind cliffs. Shadows form female face, in lakes fringe. Legends tell of mature curse deceitful waters, ensnare. Unbalanced minds, death plunging simulate barnacle geese ~ to inherit her beauty.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/26/2020 5:26:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/26/2020 7:41:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem and for taking the time to comment. I rest enjoyed writing this, using the visual. :-)

John Lawless

Date: 10/25/2020 8:00:00 PM

Some very interesting visuals here Joanna. I had to go back and review the picture and then watch as your poem took flight.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/26/2020 2:29:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment. I let my imagination run wild with this picture. :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2020 7:53:00 PM

great creativity Those pictures have me stymied.l

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/17/2020 1:22:00 AM

I find a picture really helps to get the creative juices flowing. :-) they were fantastic pictures.