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Her Last Breaths

Asphyxiating one breath at a time Oxygen levels not worth a dime Gasping for breath A step closer to death We will soon hear her funeral bells chime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/18/2021 7:39:00 PM
I have no idea what to say about this one! Normally, your writing unleashes the cathartic in me, but this one just makes me shake my head.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/18/2021 7:43:00 PM
This is in honor of my aunt who is 94 and having a real experience trying to pass through the veil.

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