Premiere Contest WinnerHer Just Reward

Into our classroom she flowed
Habit forming a sweeping swirl
And rosily did her face glow beneath her wimple
Pink and shining as though wafted straight  from heaven
Leaving us small kids of seven entranced
By this gift of God who
through our midst shone
No sharp tones fixed us to our seats
Just the sweet,soft sounds
Of dear Sister Dorothea
To us her words were the milk and honey 
Which into our minds poured
And there have stayed even unto old age
We had all fallen in love with her gentle radiance
Holding us in its bright  and kind embrace
How much  dismay  to me  did her passing bring,
The final redemptive  comfort 
That she had humbly  earned her heavenly reward
As the gift of God for her earthly  dedication
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Congratulations, Denis!
Bruce Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 3:02 PM
So very kind of you,Kim
Sikorski Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Wonderful poem ! Congratulations !!!!
Bruce Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 4:17 AM
Thank you for your kind words,Kimberley
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoy your win and day............
Bruce Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Thank you,Paula, for your good wishes
Drowley Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 10:27 AM
'Denis, Congratulations on your win! A wonderful tribute. David'
Bruce Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 11:13 AM
Thank you for your kind comment,David
Mcintosh Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Enjoyed. Love and blessings sent your way, Gina
Bruce Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Salve,Regina,gratias tibi ago
Ward Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 4:13 AM
My congratulations on your First Trophy gained at Poetry Soup, Denis. Thank you for sending it to my contest called "Nun", where the rules were that the nun in question had to be called Dorothea, a name meaning "gift of God", a phrase you were asked to put twice in the poem.
Bruce Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thank you,Julia, for letting me know. I am delighted to have had the honour of your approval and I enjoyed writing this poem.
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