Her Heart Is the Sea

Her eyes never leave
the moonlit horizon.
She will wait
an eternity, if she must.
She paces
as the tides
crash forth, then recede
back to the ocean.

Only memories
return here.
The ship departing
from the docks,
the sun sparkling
on the water,
a pair of dolphins
jumping
through the surface.
They had seen it
while in each other's arms.
Yet, now they
are distant
memories.

The sky turned ominous,
dark waters
engulfed the ship.
Everything went dark,
they lost sight
of each other
beneath the churning waves.
Her lungs
filled with salt water
as she desperately
gasped for air,
for life.

She drowned
the same day he did.
Her soul
washed ashore
along with her
cold, lifeless body.

She remains
here,
haunting the coast.
Her feet leave
no imprints
in the sand.
She moves
with the wind,
drifts upon it, 
like sea-foam
atop the waves.
The dark water
flows
through her
transparent form.

Her spirit's heart glows,
shining outward
like a lighthouse beacon
showing him the way
back
to her arms.
She is waiting
for him
to rejoin her.
He will return
just as she has.








Written by: Kelly Deschler    October, 10th, 2013  


This was originally written for Poetess Darkly's contest - 
"Heart Of The Sea"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Yates Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 6:04 PM
This reminds me of the movie where Kevin Costner drowned.
Deschler Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:53 PM
I think you are referring to the movie "Message in a Bottle", and I can definitely see the similarity between the two... Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, Bill. I appreciate it!
Callus Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Beautiful, expressive, emotional and clothed in imagery. never ending hope? // congrats on merited win Kelly :) // paul
Deschler Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Never give up on hope, no matter what!...Thank you so much for your kind comments, Paul. I really do appreciate it! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Beautiful, I can see why it was a winner. I have always been drawn to the sea and I was drawn to this poem.
Deschler Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 4:00 PM
I don't live near the sea, but I do find it interesting and mysterious. I'm glad that you were drawn to this poem, and that you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for the kind comments, Richard. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Dey Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 2:37 AM
Congratulation for wonderful win,,,,
Ligon Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Chilling. Gives new meaning to "heart of the sea." Congrats, Kelly!
Devnath  Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 6:39 AM
Congratulation for this excellent win for this excellent poem. Loved always, bl
Mehta Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations on the win, Kelly
Anglesey Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 10:28 PM
Quite a haunting story told with elegance. Congrats on the win in SKAT's contest. Very deserving of a win in any contest :)
A  Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Kelly.... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 4:09 PM
I'm shocked that you didn't place with this entry. It's wonderful. Someone obviously didn't see what a jewel of a poem this is. Brilliant work, dear sister <3
Zerbst Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Awesome poem! Sad and dark, yet with a ray of hope that he may yet come, no matter if it is an eternity. I admire the faithfulness of your character. I also think you did a very good job of introducing the story without giving away that she was not in her bodily form; it really adds interest.
Mohammed Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Beautifully crafted imagery. I like the fact it was told in a narrative form which makes it all the more interesting.
Duncan Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 8:11 PM
reads like an awesome movie ;}
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Reads like a winner to me..A very unique way to go for the contest. Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Posey Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 10:20 AM
Some writing is beyond judgment. This poem speaks volumes and can stand as perfection. You capture every emotion possible with words so eloquently chosen. Kelly, put a star beside this one.... It cannot be bested.... Your talent with pen and ink leaves me astonished.... and respecting you more with each read.... Jake
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:17 PM
- So beautiful and touching to read Kelly - A amazing poem for this contest ...... it will peak high on wins list! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:07 PM
heartfelt beautiful piece kelly excellently penned
Horsman Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:53 AM
love this Kelly, you have put a lot of your heart in to this amazing poetry,,,, good luck in contest...
Tacito Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 9:41 AM
This feels like a great parallel to Yin & Yang's 1st date and how they connected. Wonderful!
Neels Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 7:30 AM
What a beauty this is, Kelly.. loved every line, wishing you all the best for the contest :)
Mehta Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 12:26 AM
Touching and moving write, Kelly
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