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Her Heart Is the Sea

Her eyes never leave the moonlit horizon. She will wait an eternity, if she must. She paces as the tides crash forth, then recede back to the ocean. Only memories return here. The ship departing from the docks, the sun sparkling on the water, a pair of dolphins jumping through the surface. They had seen it while in each other's arms. Yet, now they are distant memories. The sky turned ominous, dark waters engulfed the ship. Everything went dark, they lost sight of each other beneath the churning waves. Her lungs filled with salt water as she desperately gasped for air, for life. She drowned the same day he did. Her soul washed ashore along with her cold, lifeless body. She remains here, haunting the coast. Her feet leave no imprints in the sand. She moves with the wind, drifts upon it, like sea-foam atop the waves. The dark water flows through her transparent form. Her spirit's heart glows, shining outward like a lighthouse beacon showing him the way back to her arms. She is waiting for him to rejoin her. He will return just as she has. Written by: Kelly Deschler October, 10th, 2013 This was originally written for Poetess Darkly's contest - "Heart Of The Sea"

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Date: 1/11/2015 6:04:00 PM
This reminds me of the movie where Kevin Costner drowned.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/15/2015 8:53:00 PM
I think you are referring to the movie "Message in a Bottle", and I can definitely see the similarity between the two... Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, Bill. I appreciate it!
Date: 4/8/2014 5:42:00 PM
Beautiful, expressive, emotional and clothed in imagery. never ending hope? // congrats on merited win Kelly :) // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/10/2014 10:12:00 PM
Never give up on hope, no matter what!...Thank you so much for your kind comments, Paul. I really do appreciate it! :)
Date: 1/26/2014 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful, I can see why it was a winner. I have always been drawn to the sea and I was drawn to this poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/27/2014 4:00:00 PM
I don't live near the sea, but I do find it interesting and mysterious. I'm glad that you were drawn to this poem, and that you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for the kind comments, Richard. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Date: 11/12/2013 2:37:00 AM
Congratulation for wonderful win,,,,
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Date: 11/11/2013 10:02:00 AM
Chilling. Gives new meaning to "heart of the sea." Congrats, Kelly!
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:39:00 AM
Congratulation for this excellent win for this excellent poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/11/2013 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Kelly
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Date: 11/10/2013 10:28:00 PM
Quite a haunting story told with elegance. Congrats on the win in SKAT's contest. Very deserving of a win in any contest :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 9:14:00 PM
Kelly.... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
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Date: 10/24/2013 4:09:00 PM
I'm shocked that you didn't place with this entry. It's wonderful. Someone obviously didn't see what a jewel of a poem this is. Brilliant work, dear sister <3
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Date: 10/24/2013 3:45:00 PM
Awesome poem! Sad and dark, yet with a ray of hope that he may yet come, no matter if it is an eternity. I admire the faithfulness of your character. I also think you did a very good job of introducing the story without giving away that she was not in her bodily form; it really adds interest.
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:01:00 AM
Beautifully crafted imagery. I like the fact it was told in a narrative form which makes it all the more interesting.
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:11:00 PM
reads like an awesome movie ;}
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Date: 10/14/2013 5:36:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..A very unique way to go for the contest. Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/13/2013 10:20:00 AM
Some writing is beyond judgment. This poem speaks volumes and can stand as perfection. You capture every emotion possible with words so eloquently chosen. Kelly, put a star beside this one.... It cannot be bested.... Your talent with pen and ink leaves me astonished.... and respecting you more with each read.... Jake
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Date: 10/11/2013 3:17:00 PM
- So beautiful and touching to read Kelly - A amazing poem for this contest ...... it will peak high on wins list! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/11/2013 3:07:00 PM
heartfelt beautiful piece kelly excellently penned
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:53:00 AM
love this Kelly, you have put a lot of your heart in to this amazing poetry,,,, good luck in contest...
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Date: 10/11/2013 9:41:00 AM
This feels like a great parallel to Yin & Yang's 1st date and how they connected. Wonderful!
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Date: 10/11/2013 7:30:00 AM
What a beauty this is, Kelly.. loved every line, wishing you all the best for the contest :)
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Date: 10/11/2013 12:26:00 AM
Touching and moving write, Kelly
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