Her Eyes

The ghostly eye returns
My stomach forevermore churns
I could feel its sick visions swelter the atmosphere
I could feel me giving into my fears
Feeling the shift slowly rise
Tonight was the night I would look into her eyes
To find only. . .tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Scott Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:16 PM
ANOTHER COOL WRITE FRONM A COOL POET XX DAVIDSCOTT
Hunter Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 7:13 AM
mm...so good. It's got that 'Laura' feel to it! :)
Chircop Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:09 AM
heart touching poem ...glad i stopped by to read-C.C
A  Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 9:39 PM
It is sad sad! all it takes is one look. Laura, thanks for stopping by my poem, It has been an honor reading your poem tonight. LUV ~*~SKAT
Beaufort Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:29 PM
Of course, by now you have to think I am foolish since visions are only related to eyes. You are very perceptive here. There is some special charm in your writing that gives me great pleasure. Thank you. I must retire for the evening--perhaps to face who knows what.
Breidenthal Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 9:37 PM
I would never think you're foolish Duke! I love your commentary! Thanks!
Kearley Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:28 PM
:*(
Beaufort Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:27 PM
I love visions and anything about them. My "visions" have been related to me so I think I get it. Do you actually have real visions? Most people won't talk about this. They are very important messengers (friends related to dreams). I think about the good ones and subject them to reinterpretation because they are really great company. I think the "burning bush" in the old testament is actually one vision of many that are described, so I gather that visions have been around a long time.
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