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Her Eyes

Pearly and piercing, innocent and intact And I wondered in fact: How does one have eyes like that? Till I told myself, "She robbed the cat"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2013 6:19:00 PM

revisiting this one. just adore this one. You should enter it into my current contest for Faved poems.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 7:15:00 AM

I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Oluwabunmi. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 3/21/2012 11:26:00 AM

This kindly luvly. Bunmi, nice piece.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 4:47:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Oluwabunmi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/17/2012 11:32:00 AM

welcome to poetry soup. a good image in this poem.

Oluwabunmi Oke
Date: 3/19/2012 7:05:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Actually this is my first poem on PoetrySoup. I appreciate the warm welcome and cozy comments. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2012 9:26:00 PM

WOW< this is awesome. I have a cat like that. Her eyes are so beautiful green!!! A FAVE

Oluwabunmi Oke
Date: 3/19/2012 6:59:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Actually this is my first poem on PoetrySoup. I appreciate the warm welcome and cozy comments. Thank you.

Desiree Lewis

Date: 3/16/2012 6:22:00 PM

haha thats cute and funnt good job

Oluwabunmi Oke
Date: 3/19/2012 6:56:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Actually this is my first poem on PoetrySoup. I appreciate the warm welcome and cozy comments. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2012 3:35:00 PM

Funny and well done Oluwabunmi, like it.- Have a lovely weekend. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Oluwabunmi Oke
Date: 3/19/2012 7:01:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Actually this is my first poem on PoetrySoup. I appreciate the warm welcome and cozy comments. Thank you.