James Fraser Poet Couplet

Her Dusk

Viewing this vista of extraordinary scene
Scenic she's creative in historic darkened means

Meaningful silhouettes, black squared, dark undulations
Undulated to her visitors, their close clanned relations

Relative they may be, but so different in their norm
Normally they would be, differential in their clans

Clannish their panorama, now dusk before their dawn
Dawn is when there's life, a new day has spawned

Spawning oranges and reds, the dusk now bows to the suns wooing
Wooing this extraordinary scene, now my eyes are viewing





<> Not for Nette's contest, I just loved the image, and it's theme <>

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Hija De La Luna October 24, 2014 at 6:50 AM what a picturesque scene you painted with your words. i love it! James Fraser October 24, 2014 at 2:30 PM I'd forgotten all about this poem to be honest, Oh my! - thank you kindly for taking me back, James :)

Debbie Duncan July 7, 2013 at 11:36 PM Well it's a very nice image James ;}

Carol Sunshine Brown August 17, 2012 at 1:45 PM Time for a new piece of poetry James. I await your reentry into the Soup. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 13, 2012 at 8:37 AM Long time no see just looking back at members and saw you and started to read your poems again, like it well done xx

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2012 at 8:37 PM wilma just blew you a kiss!!

Francine Roberts August 3, 2012 at 11:11 PM lovely one James

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2012 at 8:15 PM So lovely, JAmes. It's great to see you on here tonight. Long time no see. how is your senorita? or is she a senora now? James Fraser August 3, 2012 at 8:22 PM Thank you kindly 'Utah Babe' for your always kind comments :)