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Her Dusk

Viewing this vista of extraordinary scene Scenic she's creative in historic darkened means Meaningful silhouettes, black squared, dark undulations Undulated to her visitors, their close clanned relations Relative they may be, but so different in their norm Normally they would be, differential in their clans Clannish their panorama, now dusk before their dawn Dawn is when there's life, a new day has spawned Spawning oranges and reds, the dusk now bows to the suns wooing Wooing this extraordinary scene, now my eyes are viewing <> Not for Nette's contest, I just loved the image, and it's theme <>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/24/2014 6:50:00 AM
what a picturesque scene you painted with your words. i love it!
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James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 2:30:00 PM
I'd forgotten all about this poem to be honest, Oh my! - thank you kindly for taking me back, James :)
Date: 7/7/2013 11:36:00 PM
Well it's a very nice image James ;}
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Date: 8/17/2012 1:45:00 PM
Time for a new piece of poetry James. I await your reentry into the Soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2012 8:37:00 AM
Long time no see just looking back at members and saw you and started to read your poems again, like it well done xx
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Date: 8/7/2012 8:37:00 PM
wilma just blew you a kiss!!
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Date: 8/3/2012 11:11:00 PM
lovely one James
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:15:00 PM
So lovely, JAmes. It's great to see you on here tonight. Long time no see. how is your senorita? or is she a senora now?
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James Fraser
Date: 8/3/2012 8:22:00 PM
Thank you kindly 'Utah Babe' for your always kind comments :)