Her Dream

Her ship was her dream,
Her escape in her mind.
Her ship was the froth in her coffee.

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James Peranteau

April 25, 2020 at 10:34 PM

am i the soul pnuema who queriez.. doez your lower cases in the title of this poem have connotations, in particular; the froth being 'he' in "her dream"? p.s...i did lurk through yourn poems, i pray that you mind not.

Lewis Raynes

April 26, 2020 at 6:43 PM

And yep, thats exactly what the froth is... :)

Lewis Raynes

April 26, 2020 at 7:04 AM

Hi James, lurk all you like :) i did put the title in lower case on purpose, her and Her are different people