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Her Depth of Despair

She returned to savor her childhood dreams the flowers by the brook, the trees by the stream She found a paved road, a boarded-up cabin her depth of despair, no developer imagines

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Date: 3/7/2023 12:17:00 PM
Life is filled with change. It can be hard to see. Have a wonderful day...............
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Date: 3/6/2023 7:59:00 AM
Heartfelt, dear one ~
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Date: 3/5/2023 10:54:00 PM
That's what the march of time often does! At least the memories stay the same. Great poem, Gershon. :)
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Date: 3/5/2023 1:45:00 PM
Very sad Gershon. Well written :)
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Date: 3/5/2023 10:15:00 AM
Nothing can stay the same forever. A little sad. . Have a great Sunday afternoon, GW.
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Date: 3/5/2023 8:02:00 PM
Even the sun, moon, and stars come and go...
Date: 3/5/2023 4:46:00 AM
Ha similar to what l wrote about….progress, change and memories! Lovely B.B…..Debx
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Date: 3/5/2023 7:59:00 PM
Great minds think alike, eh?!
Date: 3/5/2023 2:43:00 AM
We feel extremely disappointed over the unexpected changes brought to the place where we spent our childhood. We reach there to recollect old memories, but the change blocks our imagination. Beautifully written Gershon
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Date: 3/5/2023 7:58:00 PM
They say 'You can't go back.' Maybe they're right...
Date: 3/5/2023 12:23:00 AM
wonderful and emotionnal, thanks yann
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Date: 3/5/2023 7:56:00 PM
Yann, thanks for your support! ~ Gershon

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