Her Death

Her Death
-The trigger lay steady and sardonic in the hands of the ready stalker.
-She lays unaware , a spot for each grand representation of naiveness in her hair.
Full of innocence-didn’t even have chance to mature. For the hunter was to ensure the value of her fur, by stripping her bare of what she had earned.
-she was nothing more than her new found horror
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Date: 9/18/2025 7:14:00 AM
Your poem is chilling and evocative, with a stark portrayal of innocence lost. The language is raw and haunting. The emotional impact is undeniably powerful and unsettling.
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Dana Bain
Date: 9/18/2025 11:39:00 PM
Im glad you was able to know my intention with the poem, i was a little worried that itd be seen as just a hunting rather than losing innocent, im glad you liked it thank you.
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