Her Come Hither Look

Ethereal cloud of pink carnations and blue hydrangeas
Overtook her thoughts, turning her wispy and willing
Her caramel skin tones oozed into her Barbie dream girl mind
Silken red teddy-laden, she gave him her come hither look.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Caren, your enticing pen spills with the sizzle of sensual.. a temptress comes to life in the sexy mood you set. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Thank you Susan. I am overjoyed by this sweet comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 6:25 PM
Beautifully done in living color!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:19 PM
I am such a scamp!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 5:32 PM
she sure knows the way to get in the mood!!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:20 PM
She sure does!
Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 3:34 PM
I wonder if Teddy blushed?!... Cute as a button, Caren! Adorable. ~ Ken Doll
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:20 PM
On another poetry site there is a KEN DOLL. Would that be you?
One Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Ooh la la... Sensual few lines
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:20 PM
Hahaha! There was a photo prompt that went well with this one.
Crabtree Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:25 PM
A little naughty write :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 9:20 PM
I can be a naughty woman believe me!
Proxenos Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 4:15 AM
Caren this is excellent poetry with a great many interpretations in mind that could be drawn from it, the answer would be of course if he responded to her come hither look. Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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November 16, 2020 at 9:21 PM
hahahaha He had better! It might be his only chance!
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