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Her Come Hither Look

Ethereal cloud of pink carnations and blue hydrangeas Overtook her thoughts, turning her wispy and willing Her caramel skin tones oozed into her Barbie dream girl mind Silken red teddy-laden, she gave him her come hither look.

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Date: 11/17/2020 9:03:00 PM
Caren, your enticing pen spills with the sizzle of sensual.. a temptress comes to life in the sexy mood you set. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/18/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I am overjoyed by this sweet comment.
Date: 11/16/2020 6:25:00 PM
Beautifully done in living color!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2020 9:19:00 PM
I am such a scamp!
Date: 11/16/2020 5:32:00 PM
she sure knows the way to get in the mood!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2020 9:20:00 PM
She sure does!
Date: 11/16/2020 3:34:00 PM
I wonder if Teddy blushed?!... Cute as a button, Caren! Adorable. ~ Ken Doll
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2020 9:20:00 PM
On another poetry site there is a KEN DOLL. Would that be you?
Date: 11/16/2020 2:36:00 PM
Ooh la la... Sensual few lines
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2020 9:20:00 PM
Hahaha! There was a photo prompt that went well with this one.
Date: 11/16/2020 2:25:00 PM
A little naughty write :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2020 9:20:00 PM
I can be a naughty woman believe me!
Date: 11/16/2020 4:15:00 AM
Caren this is excellent poetry with a great many interpretations in mind that could be drawn from it, the answer would be of course if he responded to her come hither look. Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2020 9:21:00 PM
hahahaha He had better! It might be his only chance!

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