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Her Coconut Cream Pies

She loves coconut cream pies.
She bakes them especially for her
If I loved them, she would feel better.
Nevertheless, I hate coconut since forever.
She bakes them especially for her
Sometimes making them for friends,
Nevertheless, I hate coconut since forever.
Ever since, I drank coconut milk.
She bakes them especially for her
If I loved them, she would feel better.
Sometimes making them for friends
She loves coconut cream pies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 15, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Let her enjoy her scrumptious cream pies. You don't have to eat them:):) congrats Cecil, nice one...cheers Margaret
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May 15, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Congrats Cecil on your HM in the Pantoum contest... for this remarkable poem.. enjoy your special honor..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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May 10, 2010 at 1:48 PM
WEll, this is sure cute! I feel that way when I bake something I love but my husband does not. It's just "for her!!" thanks for your welcome comment today. Luv, andrea
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