Her Clear Sky Blue Eyes

i look out the window
at the white winter world

she shows her clear sky 
blue eyes frozen in pain

my mind cries 
as people pass by 

on sidewalks leaving 
tracks in the snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bateman Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:25 AM
Hello Alex, This one captivates the senses with a vivid word picture. Excellent!! Cheers, Gary
Christian-Bowling Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 1:21 PM
I love this poem so much I had to post a comment on it again great pen men ship-Love Ettie
Christian-Bowling Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Nice poem Alex I really enjoyed it:)
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:26 PM
a visual delight but deep and sad!!! :-) Hugs Jan xx
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