James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Her Caramel Soft Skin

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                   Around mine thoughts 
                  The most sweet at that

                      her tender words
                                her
                        candied odors

                     Mine duke's digits 
                               stick
                  to her caramel soft skin
                          as i unwrap 
                          the depth of
                        her sweetness

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Wilma Neels September 14, 2010 at 5:45 AM This is so yummy there must be something wrong with me :) hehe just kidding James, enjoyed your unwrapping skills :) Wilma James Peranteau June 3, 2021 at 12:56 AM The belated ty dear poet and know this, this wuz about the MarryJane caramel candy and a girl I wuz dating(loving) named Mary. The ”roll”, wuz me on the living room floor as I rolled over and devoured her... w hole.....can ya imagin this sweet sticky mix

Brittany Andrews September 5, 2010 at 5:44 PM omg! this is sooo touching...... if you dont mind read mine somethime and comment on what you think -Angel4eva23

Connie Marcum Wong September 5, 2010 at 3:56 PM A delightful treat for the senses James. Aloha, Connie

C.C Bloomsfield September 5, 2010 at 8:30 AM That caramel soft skin. . .hmmm,hmmm,sweet toffee indeed:)

Daver Austin September 5, 2010 at 8:26 AM This aint no candied apple 'cause apples don't talk, but the piece is just as sweet and much more. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2010 at 1:06 PM James your photos of u and your handsome son are great... I just posted my wedding photos luv.. if u need help let me know to post a blog photo.. cause I just changed mine..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 25, 2010 at 7:42 AM Appreciate your sweet words this afternoon James and can share in your loss as well... hopefully our memories of their short lives sustain us... till we meet again.. enjoyed your warm and welcome comments.. with luv..

Sharon Tideswell August 25, 2010 at 5:27 AM wow, you sent my mind backwards and forwards with your sensual write...a lady...a toffee...no, a lady...or is it a toffee? Haha, very, very clever and a pleasure to read ~ Sharon :) James Peranteau June 3, 2021 at 12:58 AM P.s...the eccentric artist luv, stops for no one whilst picking up hikers James Peranteau June 3, 2021 at 12:57 AM ‘Winks

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 24, 2010 at 3:18 PM Sensuous and alluring James.. captivating the reader its full of the essence of romance as well.. my skin has caramelized being in the Italian sun so much... enjoyed your clever creation today.. and appreciate your very sweet words on my write as well..my friend.. luv to u and Noah too... u might want to read "Magnificent Miracle" for Catie's contest..its a true story..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 24, 2010 at 9:50 AM Soup mail in a moment, James.

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2010 at 3:47 PM quite sensual, James. Thanks, btw, for responding to my blog the other day. I just now saw your comment. I would get too bored watching the kids the whole time and would eventually have to join in! LUv,Andrea

Ralph Taylor August 21, 2010 at 8:05 PM Wow what an excellent write, James. Great job. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind words. You're welcome to pass mine along if you wish. Have a great weekend. Ralph

Skat A August 21, 2010 at 7:12 PM James, mm mm mm :-) I am glad I stoped to read your wonderful poetry. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat

Carolyn Devonshire August 21, 2010 at 5:27 PM Your caramel poem oozes with passion, dear James. She sounds like quite a delicious treat! Please send some prayers my way for Monday, okay, hon? Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick August 21, 2010 at 3:59 PM Awesome romantic write that reaches deep within the heart of the lonely...Sara

John Loving Iii August 21, 2010 at 11:36 AM caramel. my favoriat color in the rainbow

Carol Sunshine Brown August 20, 2010 at 10:53 AM Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today James. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Dakarai Cobb August 20, 2010 at 9:15 AM nice one. i am getting hungry or am i getting horny. don't now which caramel skin i want yet