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Her Bow is Blue

Romance commenced with quiet strolls, with pleasing smiles, to ball commits. There’s a tango of scented souls. Ascent of a fantasy spritz. Bright pretty skies; her bow is blue. This coolish day, with yellow rays. Serenity; a splendid view; slight freckles and her hair ablaze. Fresh air frenetically vaults with sweet talk like a lullaby. The pitter patter of hearts’ waltz. Affair tonight - a gown, black tie. He’s snazzy in black, shiny shoes. The stars and moon! More so, her blues!

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Date: 3/13/2025 11:21:00 PM
You must like dancing...I love your imagery. Things must end unfortunately :( "The stars and moon, More so, her blues"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, sweet one! Had fun with this one!
Date: 3/7/2025 5:57:00 PM
This is very pretty, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2025 5:53:00 AM
Thank you, Dale! :)
Date: 3/6/2025 2:36:00 PM
This is an amazing poem. Your words bring back memory to so many of us the lovely formal event and the nervous anticipation of preparation. I love the feel of it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 5:23:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda!

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