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Her Blue Moon Face

from beneath time’s sand I uncover buried memory lane taking me to deserted room in twilight dissolving known faces but for one with pleading eyes of flowing tears looking at me the way they did when I left her forever in bleak wilderness night lays stardust on my eyes… her face turns blue moon July 4, 2020 Total words in text : 40 Syllable count for Haiku : 5/7/5 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : A Memory Sponsor : Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/26/2020 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Subimal!
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Date: 7/4/2020 3:07:00 PM
Great write Subimal! Perfect for the contest! All the very best!
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Date: 7/4/2020 6:08:00 AM
So beautiful. Incredible. Love and prayers sent your way. Bless you
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