Jack Horne Poet Tanka

Her Blue Bikini

her blue bikini
matches the blue of her eyes
sets off her black hair
reveals her perfect physique
as she runs along the beach


*inspired by a picture in a newspaper of a girl on a beach 

For Francine's Blue contest: Beach

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Kash Poet July 1, 2011 at 7:59 AM It is Blue in blue in blue!!!Excellent:)

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2011 at 10:10 PM hey, I was wondering how someone would fit blue into this beach one. good job of it, jack. Great thinking!! sounds like the old tv show's wonderwoman you are describing. that woman named LInda. Was that her name?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 30, 2011 at 6:39 PM a cool reflection Jack of blue on blue on blue contest.. good luck with this creative write.. my bikini is black and gold the colors of my husband's football team..oh that man..luv..

James Foulk June 30, 2011 at 11:18 AM oh those blue eyes, and black hair, blue bikinis are nice also. a great write. thank you for commenting on Blooming Rose Bush.