Her

HER

When i find a girl that i so love 
In that second, there is nothing can be above
When i see her eyes
i realize that is the star in my sky
When i heard her voice
GOD! I have never feel that in my life
When she in my heart 
that is most important thing that i ever had
First time i meet you
i know, she is the one
But
Once a time we are so close
Once a time that the thing is all right
Just wish i can understand
so be it 
when my heat is still a life
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May 26, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Hi Danny, your poem is beautiful but it is not ghazal. Check the site there is a good explanation about ghazal.
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