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Her I wanted more than anything Her image clear and fuzzy in my head Her sensational eyes and beaming gaze Her love for books and stories of another. Especially at night she was so clear I was sure When I went out she’d be bumping into me So I remained To hold her in The sureness of her perfection And look at her until I fell asleep. She was the reason to keep up With youth, sockets spilling over eyes, beer Stuff my senses with versions of her The reason for toss without settle For whom other than her would I, Ever, in this life, take. In any other poem she would be not human But to myself, she may.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 3:34:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Drim. :)
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:51:00 PM
Drim Metrics, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/20/2016 1:02:00 PM
Irina,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/20/2016 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful i love it <3
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